Moved by the kids, I decided to donate all my money to them.被孩子們感動(dòng)了，我決定把我所有的錢都捐給他們。Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.點(diǎn)評(píng)：分詞作狀語可以用來替代時(shí)間、條件、原因等狀語從句，讓文章顯得更加簡潔，同時(shí)功底更深。分詞作狀語的用法：當(dāng)狀語從句的主語與主句的主語一樣時(shí)，可直接省略從句的主語，并把從句的謂語改成分詞（主動(dòng)語態(tài)改成現(xiàn)在分詞，被動(dòng)語態(tài)改成過去分詞），從而構(gòu)成分詞作狀語結(jié)構(gòu)。【例1】When I see Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.→ Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.【例2】Because I was moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.→ Moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.Obviously, one of the best ways to keep healthy is to do sports.顯然，保持健康最好的方法之一是做運(yùn)動(dòng)。Eventually, every child will leave home to lead his own life as a fully independent adult.最終，每一個(gè)孩子都會(huì)離開家庭去過自己的生活，成為一個(gè)完全獨(dú)立的成年人。點(diǎn)評(píng)：如果要選一種最讓人心生感觸的句型，副詞提前的做法即使不是最好，也是之一了。前置的副詞讓作者還沒說出具體的事件，內(nèi)心的想法已經(jīng)呼之欲出。這正是這種無比簡單的語法現(xiàn)象所煥發(fā)出的魅力所在。除了提升情感效果之外，副詞提前也是讓文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰的一個(gè)非常好的辦法。我們常用的firstly, furthermore, finally等等所謂的“邏輯詞”都是屬于這一種類型，同學(xué)們要時(shí)刻想著去用它。注意事項(xiàng)：用來提前的必須是——副詞！除了上面給出來的2個(gè)例句之外，再分享一篇作文里一個(gè)較難的句子，作文題目是“我最難忘的回憶”。【例】Oddly enough, my most precious memory lies in the days when I was ill in hospital...非常奇怪的是，我最珍貴的回憶發(fā)生在我生病住院的那些日子里。Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.Doing exercise keeps us healthy.點(diǎn)評(píng)：動(dòng)名詞做主語是最簡單的一種加分句型了，非常容易掌握。注意事項(xiàng)：如果主語只有一個(gè)動(dòng)作，謂語動(dòng)詞要用單數(shù)第三人稱！大家可能覺得上面給出來的兩個(gè)例句并不是十分精彩，但是動(dòng)名詞作主語只要合理使用，還是會(huì)讓人眼前一亮的。請(qǐng)看下句：【例】Besides, taking some small sports equipment along with you can help you do exercise whenever you are free.另外，隨身攜帶一些小型運(yùn)動(dòng)器械可以讓你利用任何空閑的時(shí)間來運(yùn)動(dòng)。It is in recent years that people begin to realize the importance of environmental protection.最近這些年人們才開始意識(shí)到保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性。點(diǎn)評(píng)：強(qiáng)調(diào)句型是一種規(guī)律性極強(qiáng)、非常好用的高級(jí)句型，有利于增進(jìn)文章的感情色彩。強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的基本模式：It is / was + 句子要強(qiáng)調(diào)的部分 + that + 句子中剩余的部分。例如，原本我們想寫的句子是：Eric found a beautiful vase in the cave.要強(qiáng)調(diào)主語Eric，則為It was Eric that found a beautiful vase in the cave.要強(qiáng)調(diào)賓語a beautiful vase，則為 It was a beautiful vase that Eric found in the cave.Beijing, the capital of China, has a great many places of interest.The fact is clear that our planet is becoming warmer and warmer.點(diǎn)評(píng)：相比于前幾種閃光句型，同位語和同位語從句就要復(fù)雜一點(diǎn)了，尤其是同位語從句要復(fù)雜一些。當(dāng)同位語從句被合理使用，尤其是和排比句一起使用的時(shí)候，所產(chǎn)生的效果是震撼性的。同位語從句的基本結(jié)構(gòu)是：抽象名詞+ that + 抽象名詞的內(nèi)容（從句）+主句剩余部分。【例】I have just recieved the message that a serious earthquake struck a county of Taiwan yesterday.我剛收到一個(gè)消息：昨天臺(tái)灣某縣發(fā)生了嚴(yán)重的地震。關(guān)于同位語從句的效果，且看《獨(dú)立宣言》中的名句：We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness.我們認(rèn)為以下事實(shí)是不言自明的：人生而平等，并擁有不可分割的權(quán)利，包括擁有生命的權(quán)利、獲得自由的權(quán)利以及追求幸福的權(quán)利。1.專業(yè)。這些句型都是經(jīng)過驗(yàn)證的在議論文中經(jīng)常使用的套話，使用這些句型顯得比較專業(yè)。2. 萬金油。這些句型經(jīng)過前人的實(shí)踐發(fā)現(xiàn)非常容易使用，只要往自己寫好的句子上硬套就行，甚至對(duì)時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)都無特殊要求，如同萬金油一樣。3. 無意義。這些句型本身并沒有什么特殊含義，只是輔助一下預(yù)期或讓表意更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)一點(diǎn)，有它無它對(duì)語義影響其實(shí)不大。There is no denying that + 陳述句 不可否認(rèn)……There is no doubt that + 陳述句 毫無疑問……Needless to say, 陳述句 不用多說，……It is widely accepted that + 陳述句 眾所周知……As is known to all, 陳述句 眾所周知，……From my point of view, 陳述句 我個(gè)人認(rèn)為，……Personally, 陳述句 我個(gè)人認(rèn)為，……As far as I am concerned, 陳述句 我個(gè)人認(rèn)為，……As far as I know, 陳述句 據(jù)我所知，……When it comes to …， 陳述句 說到……鑒于句型太多，就不一一舉例子了，大家只要把自己想說的話放到“陳述句”那一部分就可以了。記住，剩余的部分一點(diǎn)都不要改，包括逗號(hào)！Mr Zhang is the most handsome teacher in the world.點(diǎn)評(píng)：這句顯得很普通，但是如果我們使用經(jīng)典句型的話，就會(huì)顯得高級(jí)一點(diǎn)。【例】As is known to all Mr Zhang is the most handsome teacher in the world.【例】As far as I am concerned, Mr Zhang is the most handsome teacher in the world.我個(gè)人認(rèn)為，張老師是世界上最帥的老師。As winter comes, more and more leaves fall off the trees, yellow and sad.The pollution is getting worse as the economy develops.隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，污染正在變得更加嚴(yán)重。Mom’s hair is not as black as it used to be.as time goes by 隨著時(shí)間的流逝regard A as B 把A當(dāng)做Bas we all know/ as everyone knows 正如我們都知道的as we had expected 正如我們期待的那樣as is mentioned before 正如前面所提到的as the saying goes 就像諺語說的那樣as it turns out 正如結(jié)果所展示的那樣as ... as it used to 和過去一樣……The man, who is called father by me, is trying to ensure us a better life with all his effort.那個(gè)被我稱作父親的人，正在竭盡全力為我們提供更好的生活。I seldom waste any time during the classes, which helps me to be highly efficient while studying.在課堂上，我很少浪費(fèi)任何時(shí)間，這有助于我在學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)候更加高效。點(diǎn)評(píng)：在評(píng)分過程當(dāng)中，一般來說，文章中只要有一個(gè)正確使用的定語從句，且沒有其他的硬傷，會(huì)給上1分的文采分。Only when I noticed the grey hairs did I realized that Mum was getting old.只在我注意到那一絲絲白發(fā)的時(shí)候，我才意識(shí)到，媽媽已經(jīng)老了。Not only do we collect information about the animals in danger, but we also post the information on the Internet.我們不僅收集瀕危動(dòng)物的信息，還把這些信息發(fā)布在網(wǎng)上。Never will I forget the days that I spent with my friends.我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘了和朋友們在一起的日子。So moved was I that I lost my tongue.點(diǎn)評(píng)：倒裝句已經(jīng)是“必殺”級(jí)別的閃光句型了，只要能正確使用，必然能獲得文采分。很多同學(xué)對(duì)倒裝句有著天然的畏懼心理，以為倒裝句一定很復(fù)雜。事實(shí)上倒裝句滲透著英語的各個(gè)方面，我們?nèi)粘Ｉ顒?dòng)使用的there be句型甚至一些簡單的交際用語都是倒裝句。當(dāng)然there be句型并不算閃光句型。例句：Only in this way can we improve our English. 只有用這種方法我們才能提高英語。2. Not only ... but also 倒裝句式：Not only + 一般疑問句，but (also) + 陳述句.例句：Not only did we play basketball together, but we also talked for a while. 我們不僅一起打了籃球，還聊了一會(huì)。句式：Never / Seldom + 一般疑問句例句：Seldom have I seen him recently. 我最近很少見到他。句式：So + adj / adv + 一般疑問句+ that + 陳述句；Such + 名詞性短語 +一般疑問句+that+陳述句例句：So handsome is Jack that everyone likes him.Such a handsome man is Jack that everyone likes him.If I were you, I would help my parents do more housework.如果我是你的話，我會(huì)幫我爸媽做更多的家務(wù).If only I could stay at school forever.要是我能永遠(yuǎn)留在學(xué)校就好了。點(diǎn)評(píng)：估計(jì)有不少同學(xué)看到“虛擬語氣”四個(gè)字都會(huì)被嚇到。是的，虛擬語氣太難了�？墒亲鳛槭箝W光句型的壓軸之作，恐怕也只有虛擬語氣能擔(dān)此重任。這里給大家講兩個(gè)最簡單的虛擬語氣，同學(xué)們套用即可，等充分理解了這兩句，以后再深入學(xué)習(xí)不遲。1. If I were you, I would .... 如果我是你的話，我就會(huì)……把你想說的話放在I would 后面就行了。注意前面只能用were。2. If only I could ... 如果我能……就好了。
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